What a lovely poem, with echoes of a creator on his canvas

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Wow. Think I feel a tear!!!

Great poem, very personal. The emotion really comes out, but there is such a positive feeling at the end.

I thought the autumn leaves poem is uncomplicated, sophisticated and very effective.

Very Nice.

great : )

I love poems about nature, especially when u can put it so beautifully! Lovely!

Wonderful poem and beautifully written!

Very nice poem.

Very nice. I like the stage metaphor, really novel way of looking at the season.

Very nice Good job!

A very nice poem. I like the verse(you fell like the curtain, when your part was played). Well done.

Honest and eloquent.

I liked your poem, smooth, soft and creative. Want to check out mine too. I have 5 out there so far. Thanks Boni

will do, certainly

Great peace…Perfect..

Nice work: miss those colors now as we are due for another foot of the white stuff!
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Clay

I love this poem,, fall to me is like a master play as well, great write,,

Difficult to pick a favourite season as all have such different appeal. But if I had to choose, Autumn would be it. The colours in Autumn are just so wonderful, and it’s the one season that you really, really don’t want to end, as it’s followed by winter, which although beautiful in itself, can also be cold and harsh.

Loved this poem, simple yet really pleasantly warm.

Aldrin

Great poem , I loved the duality of the actor and the leaves,both having thier moment in the spotlight. Thank you.

I liked the intent and the word usage and flow. But, I would think it could be polished with punctuation and possibly length.

Woah, the metaphor you use works really well here. The imagery is easily visualized as well. Nice work!

beautiful poem. even though we have no defined autumn season here in our country, autumn has been my favorite season.. i could vividly imagine the scenery of this poem. great!

wow! cleverly written…. i like it…

A good artist can paint with words,I feel you have founds your canvas.Your fan ,friend,smile

wow….I really really enjoyed that. Thank you so much!

This is beautiful. The imagery is so gentle and heartfelt – something like the season! Thanks for sharing.

Hi,

Your words have the depth to paint the most gracious picture on the reader’s mind,Autumn is my favorite season too,its mysterious to realize how a single season can play on the minds of the poets with myriad of colors.A lesson perhaps that directs us to its bigger cause.

my deepest respect and gratitude,revivor
LOVE IS ALL

Walk in beauty change the world.

I enjoyed this

You painted a great picture of the this scene. I felt I was there.

Very good.

what a lovely little poem. Very simple and gets the imagery across.

Just beautiful, cool yet warmth especially the ending.

great simplicity,

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I like this alot, it has a unique POV, and appropriate language to suit the theme. Good job! Thanks for sharing.

wonderful!!!!

One of those poems to be savored repeatedly.

Such a wonderful piece , with elegance , and grace. Thank you for bringing your work to my attention.

Beautiful! ~30 I liked it

I had to get used to this kind of poetry, but now I think I start getting the hang of it. Well done.

I love this Ivor! It\’s like a gentle homage to a humble yet very vital personage. Thanks for sending it around during this season.

Excellent imagery and description of Autumn

Ya this is really nice season . And in india its has special creadits .And specially in Punjab

I am quite swept away. Beautiful words. Lovely photo. Thank you for sharing.

lovely poem.

Nice, the way you compare the leaves with a curtain coming down.

beautiful phrasing and imagery, Ivor. Love this one.

This is excellent!!Nature is indeed an actor. Background to the drama called life and playing the play that plays in our lives! Great!

autumn brought more joy, reflection in the moment of solicitude!

Some great beautiful lines here

what a wonderful poem… i love the picture too

Yes, our glorious Creator God at work