A Minnesota Autumn, in verse.

Hear the sorrow of the wind
and the whispers in the trees,
as the southern-flying geese
honk a passage in the night
over harvested brown fields
framing water, town and tree.

Feel the sighing of the wind
on a cold November eve,
under clear-as-crystal sky
with the stars of icy blue
that wink down to say goodnight
through the frosted window pane.

Hear the promise in the wind
when it speaks in elder tongues
to a dance of colored leaves,
leaving branches stark and gray
to stand mute in testament
of the seasons in the wood.

Autumn waves turn bitter cold
chilling froth upon the sand,
bidding loons a last goodbye
as their lonely echoes fade
from the beauty of the land,
on the silence of the wind.

Copyright -2001 Casey Mack

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  • Katie Marie on Jun 3, 2009

    ‘Hear the promise in the wind
    when it speaks in elder tongues
    to a dance of colored leaves,
    leaving branches stark and gray
    to stand mute in testament
    of the seasons in the wood.’

    Just love that verse. Enjoyed reading this again.

  • kate smedley on Jun 3, 2009

    The whole poem is really well done and so vivid and descriptive.

  • maranatha on Jun 3, 2009

    I can’t choose a favorite part, each section brings home a memory. Beautiful work.

  • moteintheeye on Jun 4, 2009

    I like your style.

    motie

  • Theresa Johnson on Jul 30, 2009

    very nice poem.

  • raptor22 on Jul 30, 2009

    very descriptive.

  • littlekid137 on Jul 30, 2009

    Beautifully written

  • shelly barclay on Jul 30, 2009

    Beautiful.

  • littlemama76 on Jul 30, 2009

    Wonderful read

  • David Crerand on Jul 30, 2009

    beautiful imagery

  • Marie Milton on Jul 30, 2009

    “Hear the promise in the wind
    when it speaks in elder tongues”.

    Exactly the sort of stuff I’d write…I’ve never heard of you before Casey but now I will make sure I read what you’ve got : )

    Well done!!! Thanks for putting this on the Anthology…

  • Marie on Jul 30, 2009

    Here’s another comment for the record…hehehe

  • Fegger on Jul 30, 2009

    wonderful!

  • Cebah on Jul 30, 2009

    Lovely descriptive poem. Liked :)

  • Karen Gross on Jul 31, 2009

    Beautiful imagery! Makes me almost long for summer to end.

  • Alina Beck on Aug 2, 2009

    Lovely, lovely work. You captured the landscape beautifully – I could picture it in my mind so clearly.

  • oldster on Aug 20, 2009

    Lovely poem.
    I love Autumn and the wind contributes much to it.

  • Roberta J. Morrison on Aug 27, 2009

    Some poems are felt on a visceral level; this is one. Amazing work.

  • Roberta J. Morrison on Jul 21, 2010

    I just re-read this piece. Your poems are so full of feeling and life, and laced with a beautiful, haunting quality. I enjoy your work a great deal, Casey. I always look forward to your next write.
    And autumn is my favorite season. I love all the sights, sounds and smells of autumn.

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