The cathartic sequel.

I found her hanging at sunrise

the law had left her there

she tickled lamp post with her toes,

the dew fresh on her hair.

I drove away the glad magpies

and buried her with crib

one hand still held her baby’s pins

the other clenched its bib.

I sold the last of what we owned;

bought Colt’s new forty-five,

and walked to work on moon soaked stones

with just my weighty prize.

  

Image via Wikipedia

My boss was known for lots of breaks,

diseases made him piss;

by metal trough I went to wait

to hear him make it hiss.

In clumsy laugher came my boss

his final urine flowed

and as his trousers sagged down loose,

Colt made his back explode.

He lurched around still spraying free

with buttons all undone,

he gasped as chunks of lung he breathed

awash in piss and blood.

1
Liked it
Comments (2)
  • haikumad on Dec 15, 2009

    Intriguing and shocking. Well written. May I ask where you got your ideas for this poem , please?

  • LitWurst on Dec 16, 2009

    Well, I wanted to write a ballad so I tried to think of a storyline that incorporated the darkest aspects of human nature possible (racism, infanticide, suicide, betrayal, vengeance) and tried to fit it into a gloomy urban scene. I also frequently think about how novels and films never have anyone get gunned down while urinating, so I wanted to add that piece of sensationalism in for the climax.

Leave a Comment

Hi there!

Hello! Welcome to Authspot, the spot for creative writing.
Read some stories and poems, and be sure to subscribe to our feed!

Find the Spot

Loading