Taking the sun.

TOGETHER_IN_THE_STORM_by_Leonidafremov

Two lovers in the rain, off to catch a train, to take them on a trip to sunny Spain
When all is said and done, Two weeks with all that sun, is so much better with a glass of pink Champaign
We will dine on sweet paella, on the coast of hot Marbella and throw into the sea my wet umbrella
Make love under the stars, to the sound of six guitars, while singers sing a song to Isabella
Dancers dance the wild Flamenco, the temperature starts to rise, so I carry Isabella to my bed,
We make love to the sounds below, and move with the seas ebb and flow, as I lay upon the pillow her sweet head
Now its time to sleep its seems so far way, that rainy night we walked to catch the train
Two lovers unaware of the rain in that night air, only thinking of their love and sunny Spain
Copyrightcopyright4..johnnydod 2010

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  • drelayaraja on Sep 28, 2010

    Wonderful Johnny…

  • Ethics0006 on Sep 28, 2010

    Nice Post

  • Christine Ramsay on Sep 28, 2010

    What a cute and romantic piece. Well done, Johnny.

    Christine

  • cardy on Sep 28, 2010

    A lovely sweet read a lovely write from you

  • Kaye TM on Sep 28, 2010

    so fun to read

  • Phoenix Montoya on Sep 28, 2010

    Nice… nice write. Good one!

  • My World on Sep 28, 2010

    Nice Post……

    thanks for share.

  • krrymarie on Sep 28, 2010

    Lovely romantic poem

  • LOVELYHONEY on Sep 29, 2010

    ur a wonder johnny
    and in the rain
    they’d make babies
    if they forgot their condies
    that precaution
    the rain can’t guarantee.

    the train perhaps
    would have been a better plea,
    but the thing is done
    they have had their fun
    and so lets await
    another nine months

  • J M Lennox on Sep 29, 2010

    A very sweet poem. Very nicely done!

  • Sangeeta Chaudhary on Oct 1, 2010

    good one.

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