Aye, There’s The Rub

johnnydod on Mar 10, 2010

A little light write.

My words seek employment upon this parchment

As I delve into the very soul of my understanding

To that which I call my knowledge of the written word

My couplet I present to you for your pleasure

My toil is plucked from the tone that is my past

Say if you may, your contentment of my missive

For we are to soon away from this humanity

Our attendance on this Earth depart as sudden

As does the Blink of a solitary eye

I await your critique as I await my destiny

And so I lay before you my narrative

And ponder upon your appraisal.

I bow as your servant.

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Comments (13)

Mike1229 on Mar 10, 2010
haha alright! well done
Atanacio on Mar 10, 2010
I really enjoyed this little light write LOL well done my friend
diamondpoet on Mar 10, 2010
And what a good servant always willing to please your masters and you are doing such a great job. Very clever.
Shirley Shuler on Mar 10, 2010
lol, Johnny, how clever you are!
cardy on Mar 10, 2010
I love it great work from you
joyhyena29 on Mar 10, 2010
great share^^
deep blue on Mar 10, 2010
Another amusing light write, there’s the rub, Johnny.
Citra Florenca on Mar 10, 2010
You’re so talented!
standingproud on Mar 10, 2010
Another side we see of this great diverse writer
Ruby Hawk on Mar 10, 2010
Well done, Johnny.
Moira62 on Mar 11, 2010
A wonderful write Johnny….very well written with lots of imagery in your words
Emma Green on Mar 12, 2010
Just when I thought you could not get any better, you write this!
wonder on Mar 12, 2010
Arresting presentation.

Hi there!