Bad Association

R G Lowry on Mar 28, 2010

Tags: Beauty, believe, dream, fell, flowers, forewarning, garden, happen, left, longer, made, mark, Maybe, meant, moment, nature, Premonition, realistic, really, resemble, Saw

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As soon as you associate something with something bad, you struggle to view it differently again.

The flowers in the garden

no longer resemble nature’s beauty

they mark where you fell

the moment you left me

I saw it happen in a dream

so realistic it made me believe

that it really meant something

maybe a forewarning premonition

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Linley Alexander on Mar 29, 2010
I like this one a lot. The message is very true, and I have noticed it myself. The once beautiful things, become tarnished forever when you can only think of a heart break that happened when you look at them. Very nice, well written, and nice imagery. Well done!

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