Well this is my first article/poem here :P
its a short poem I once wrote just before going to sleep.lol
hope u like it :D .

good bye, good bye i say..

while you go your way,

not looking back, not wishing back..

my words don’t touch your heart, u say..

what can I do..I am a good poet.

But then…today just ain’t my day.

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  • Themax on Nov 13, 2009

    Its not a bad day!
    yes its your day my friend,and you are so cute :)
    very well start and beautiful poem,Thanks for sharing :)

  • AlmaG on Nov 13, 2009

    Nice poem ash!… more of this to come next ^_^
    I hate it that Max beat me to commenting first :(

    Love your poem ash! ^_^

  • drelayaraja on Nov 13, 2009

    Well written poem ^_^
    I liked it a lot ^_^ Keep writing

  • Olivia Van Logum on Nov 14, 2009

    Welcome to Triond – really sweet poem, love it !

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