Just about the typical fool who thinks they r better than everyone/everything.

whos that getting off that train,

cant quite see thru this pooring rain,

its some man being rather vain,

pulling down his top- showing off his chain,

dunno whats going on in his brain, 

showing off like that he will get robbed, is he insane??,

acting like that he shud get the cane,

show him a video of himself- he cant complain,

he’s the idiot in the porsche overtaking in the wrong lane,

he is the 1 who conflicts pain,

doing horrible things for his own gain,

thinks he is on a next level- magical- like david blain,

struts around like a lion with a main,

doing dodgy deals- on society he is a drain,

pretends to be hard done by- but daddy got a plane,

only deals drugs to get himself a name,

says his daddies riches are to blame,

no need 2 work even easier than fame,

treats life just like its a game,

even calls himself by a different name,

outside he is happy- but within there is shame,

acts hard to look cool but knows its lame,

under his pillow is a picture of him and his mummy in a frame,

all she needs to do is whistle and down he came,

infront of his family he is tame……………

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Ben Aldridge on Jun 30, 2009

    please please please leave comments, i am new to all this, wana know what people think- good or bad :)

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