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Bad Smells and Disappointments: Duff’s Challenge #11

Marie Milton on Sep 25, 2009
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An alphabetical sort of poem : ))

After Bathing Couples Disappoint Everyone,

Finally Generating Heat Initializing Jolly Kids,

Love Making Nests, Or Passing Quaint,

Raw Smells To Unite Various Whafts eXiting Yielding Zealots

© Marie Milton

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  • Katie Marie on Sep 25, 2009

    :-) Very creative.

  • Darla Cooke on Sep 25, 2009

    Interesting and creative.

  • Shamanz on Sep 25, 2009

    haha, that’s really cool. You get the full credit for your creativity!

  • Theresa Johnson on Sep 28, 2009

    interesting piece marie

  • Brenda Nelson on Sep 28, 2009

    clever and a good tribute to the birds.

  • Greg Wolford on Sep 28, 2009

    Clever and creative.

  • David Crerand on Sep 29, 2009

    very clever and probably not easy.

  • maranatha on Sep 30, 2009

    That had to take awhile! Nice job.

  • Duff D Moss on Sep 30, 2009

    Hah – that is unique. Very clever of you. Good one dude! Thanks again for playing

  • larry84 on Oct 21, 2009

    Creative and enjoyable. I don’t know many people that can pull that off!

  • lillyrose on Jan 16, 2010

    I missed this one before! very unique!

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