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Josey on Aug 8, 2008

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True wisdom comes from experience.

Disconnect the past
The grown up little child
Taming all your greatness
You’ll turn out meek and mild
Your life is complicated
But you don’t know the truth
The pettiness is simple
Embedded in your youth
And soon I know you’ll see it
A world beyond your walls
Wisdom, faith, and patience
The badges of our falls

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Unofre Pili on Aug 8, 2008
Nice piece.
Josey on Aug 8, 2008
Thanks, Unofre.
The Quail on Aug 8, 2008
Awe namaste Josey,When we dare to look within and seek the answers to all our questions, we come to learn many things. Well Done!
Glynis Smy on Aug 8, 2008
Nice work
lanne on Aug 8, 2008
Very nice piece Josey.
Ruby Hawk on Aug 8, 2008
I liked it.
Abby Rose on Aug 8, 2008
Very powerfull. I really like this!
Alexa Gates on Aug 8, 2008
wow
Zealous on Aug 9, 2008
Pretty solid.
william rodriguez II on Aug 9, 2008
A verse full of wisdom.
Liane Schmidt on Aug 9, 2008
Beautiful, a coming of age poem.

Best wishes.

Sincerely,

-Liane Schmidt.
nobert soloria bermosa on Aug 9, 2008
nice poem Josey,
Ezzah Sammak on Aug 9, 2008
Short but very straight to the point. nice work.
G. Grissom on Aug 9, 2008
Yet another great piece of work, Josey! I love reading your work! even though we never met, your work makes me feel as if you are my closest friend ever!
mdegenhardt on Sep 3, 2008
The read has an easiness to it as the rhyme is wonderful. The message within about trials and effort creating results is clear and so to the point. Very well written. ~ Michael
Lavia on Oct 29, 2008
Short and to the point. I really enjoyed it.

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