Ballerina

Dee Gold on Apr 2, 2009

A short rhyme about my painting on the wall which I shared on Picable.I’m still weaving the story that will make her my main character.

This is dedicated to all those who left comments on Picable

A face that lifts the spirit

A pair of eyes full of wit

Hair shining like gold

A story never told

A simple description

That needs attention

About this ballerina

In the center arena

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Comments (17)

Kate Smedley on Apr 2, 2009
Nice poem, whets the appetite for the story and suits the picture so well.
becca t on Apr 2, 2009
nice poem I enjoyed it. the pic is awsome too. kinda resembles cinderella cool
Mrs M on Apr 2, 2009
The painting kinda reminds me of cinderella! Loved it! Oh wait…I just realized someone else wrote that Oh well I am posting this anyways!!!
Fresh Writing on Apr 2, 2009
Very nice! Haha…I agree with Becca and Mrs. M…does sound a bit like Cinderalla.

Keep up the good work!

-Fresh Writing
rutherfranc on Apr 2, 2009
nice bit to justify the pic!
Cassandra Antares on Apr 2, 2009
very nice
papaleng on Apr 3, 2009
this is more better.
Edward J Rodrigues on Apr 3, 2009
cool one…
clay hurtubise on Apr 3, 2009
Good one, feels like part two is on its way!
Thanks,
Clat
Melody Arcamo Lagrimas on Apr 3, 2009
cool piece, and the painting is very lovely.
nobert soloria bermosa on Apr 3, 2009
simply beautiful
Betty Carew on Apr 3, 2009
Just beautiful Dee
DA Cournean on Apr 4, 2009
Very nice Dee.
JK Kristie on Apr 5, 2009
Nice, good job.
CutestPrincess on Apr 6, 2009
nice pic!!
nice choice of words to go with it, well done!
angelonearth2001 on Apr 8, 2009
Great poem and pic…..
S A JOHNSON on Apr 9, 2009
Nice poem to go with a picture

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