Baptismal Beginnings

T. S. Lewis on Mar 18, 2010

Each night I lay with you, I feel the need to repent.

Satisfaction split

Separating proliferation

into a more meaningful act

For this was not naturally designed

But a moment desirably needed

Divulge the depth of your knowledge to me

Show me how to correct small errors

Your body is weak; and

Your spirit hungers for my scripture

But words alone you shall not live by

The silent push of syllables

Can be read as your soul gets ready

This tongue shall cure you

From all temptation

Nectar forms in a pool of tranquility,

Trapping my mind in a sexy mood

Treading energetically, searching for the right spot

Warmly getting hot!

Your intake consumes hardness

Releasing a soft jetted-stream

Thoughts are swept away

Diving into the deepest part of you

Drowning as my lungs fill with air

Gasping for more, am I coming?

What is this insatiable feeling?

As I sink breathing in your abyss

Immersing you in ecstasy

Hold it in just a few moments more

So we both can satisfy sin

with lustful indulgences

Pull me out of your wetness

Then dip me repeatedly

Every night with you

Causes a heavenly rejoice

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Comments (9)

diamondpoet on Mar 18, 2010
Hello T.S. this was okay, but it kinda lost the sizzle, your other pieces have more passion and heat, this one didn’t make me blush and all the others have. Good job though.
Kakraba Afful on Mar 18, 2010
you sly devil! I almost had an erection! Excellent piece, I learn from the best
tatikos on Mar 18, 2010
nice job man
Christine Ramsay on Mar 18, 2010
A very passionate and well written piece. It made me blush, lol.

Christine
XXElleXX on Mar 18, 2010
Well my eyes lit up and my mouth began to water as I read this …kinda like eating a large bowl of chocolate fondue with a plate of assorted fruit!…hehehe…hmmmm…heavenly poetry T. S. Lewis
8Shei8 on Mar 18, 2010
After reading this, you do need to repent
Darla Cooke on Mar 19, 2010
Wow! Great poem!
standingproud on Mar 19, 2010
Well I looked away a couple of times,lol..
Awesomely done my friend.
mo hoyal on Mar 24, 2010
I think I get bashful when it comes to reading but your writing is par excellence and so I just put this feeling off to getting close to an old lady mode now, ha! You’re great T.S.

Hi there!