A mental challenge with death.

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The bare tatters of clothing

she had left barely concealed her modesty,

but she couldn’t hide her wounds,

it was going against the grain,

as she winced with pain,

and then with a sharp intake of breath,

she avoided death,

the angels held her upright,

cradling her,

death was demanding,

but she remained standing,

she was terribly light,

she went white,

thought she was dead,

then red,

she swallowed hard,

then shook her head,

alive,

and she would survive.

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  • maranatha on Aug 15, 2009

    Wow! My young son had an accident once, I thought he was dead. This poem brought that vision so clearly to mind, the express moment when I knew he was still alive….

  • Sammy2000 on Aug 15, 2009

    Love it!!!!

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