The poem Barn, by Amanda Gordon, discripes in detail her families stable. Details about the day to day sounds, smells, and activities.
The smell of a barn sticks to you like that of a last cigarette.
Shavings and horsehair cling to your sweaty body.
The smell of the fresh load of hay,
Lingers in the air of the hot summer day
Indoor barn and indoor arena
25 stalls lined with 25 fans;
The horses screaming their demands
The concrete isle
Announces each horses arrival.
Country music playing in the background
The Mexican boys run from stall to stall
Their horses prepared for their master’s call
When unsure of what to do
They ask in broken English for a clue.
The master looks at them unsure of what he heard
My uncle’s form of Spanish add an “O” to every word
“Saddle-o for the horse-o.”
They look at him with questioning eyes
“Sia para el caballo,” I try to clarify.
From upstairs in the boys apartment comes a smell
Cooking Mexican food brings back memories from home; I can tell.
For the smallest moment they pause and I can see
Them trying to recall a distant memory
The longing in their eyes makes me wish
That I had something so dear to miss
Spanish music plays in the distance
And for a second I am lost
In a world that is not my own
I wonder why they work with such persistence
When no one here cares of their existence
And then I remember the stories they told
Of good and bad and young and old
But no matter the tale they told
One thing that held true; they love their home
And back to work I go
Brush strokes heard from stall to stall,
The bay fillies kicking down her wall.
In the dryer clinging clanking
Sheets and blankets buckles breaking.
In the wash stall Marty’s grunting
Continue scrubbing never daunting
BOOM! BOOM! BOOM! BOOM!
Down the rail Max comes marching
Even steps are always taken
Under us the footings shaken!
Feel their power through the ground
Hoof beats making beautiful sound.
A serene and peaceful place I love to go.
Summer seasons full of shows.
Working everyday
For minuscule pay
Is worth all my time
Even though technically it’s a crime.
My favorite time is after five
When everything comes alive.
The horses are fed
And put to bed
And I sit around
And listen to the sounds
And wonder how I could do anything else.
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