A neighbour of mine is fed up with her sore leg and the useless nurses.

I am a pensioner in my eighties
My neighbour often calls round
I haven’t had any visitors lately
My leg hurts and it gets me down.
 
 
All my friends that I know
Have leg problems too
It doesn’t make me feel any better though
As I can’t get my legs to go.
 
 
The nurses are no good
They rush around from one place to another
They don’t do what they should
My leg to them is just a leg so they don’t bother.

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  • ken bultman on Oct 22, 2009

    I’ve known nurse or two like that. Nice poem, though.

  • Goodselfme on Oct 22, 2009

    Good expression of your feelings through poetry.

  • Brave Photographer on Oct 22, 2009

    Very honest feeling of yours. Nice poem.

  • chitragopi on Oct 22, 2009

    good poem

  • alc on Oct 22, 2009

    A great write!

  • Atanacio on Oct 22, 2009

    interesting entry :)

  • wonder on Oct 22, 2009

    We are helpless at times. Nursing isn’t a vocation for them.

  • CrystalFlute on Oct 23, 2009

    Great writng! Talent!

  • Judi Eddy on Oct 23, 2009

    Shame, My daughter is training to be a paramedic, I will send her up he will look after your neighbour. good poem

  • Lostash on Oct 23, 2009

    Sign of the times! No-one has time for anything these days!

  • nani varron on Oct 24, 2009

    nice poem…..

  • inuni on Oct 26, 2009

    This was reality for a lot of people. nice one

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