Be cautious while taking food…

What is this, I don’t know

something I miss, I don’t know,

I like the way before what I’m consuming

but now there is a change while eating.


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Apple becomes neem, with single bit

I wait for a minute, with teeth hit,

what I’m eating, apple or neem

may be it is a remix, with two team.


It’s the new makeover of apple

which I don’t able to accept it,

what to do with the apple

I don’t know, I don’t know, I don’t know.

- The End -

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  • priyadarshani on May 14, 2011

    nice poem

  • Dreamy777 on May 14, 2011

    great one

  • Kalpita Chakrabortty on May 14, 2011

    Nice to read

  • nobert soloria bermosa on May 14, 2011

    a unique one…nice

  • Cassle Tang on May 15, 2011

    Nice poem! But I can’t fully understand the whole meaning of this one. :) But thanks for writing such a beautiful piece of work!

  • Baijayanti Pradhan on May 15, 2011

    This is about the use of pesticides in all…

  • Tulan on May 15, 2011

    Scrub those apples in soapy water and rinse well.

  • LCM Linda on May 15, 2011

    My friend told me to rub the apple surface with tooth paste to clean the chemicals that stayed on it, then rinse well. But, I prefer to peel off the surface before eating.

  • Sharif Ishnin on May 16, 2011

    Brilliant entry.

  • vijayanths on May 17, 2011

    nice read.

  • CA Johnson on May 17, 2011

    I really liked your poem. We really do need to be careful when we are eating.

  • sathi.k on May 17, 2011

    I like this poem. You have raised an awareness of the dangers of pesticides. Nice one!

  • Rakesh63 on May 21, 2011

    I like this poem

  • narupem11 on May 24, 2011

    Nice Job

  • R K Vajpeyi on May 25, 2011

    Nice one and thanks for making me feel amused after a long time!

  • Cassle Tang on May 28, 2011

    Oh, after read it for the second time now I quite understood what you mean! :) That’s why I like to visit posts that I have read before, to get some more clues which lead into better understanding and it’s also fun to look at the other comments as well. Thanks for commenting my work! Have a great day.

  • Eunice Tan on May 30, 2011

    Again, good poem

  • fishfry aka Elizabeth Figueroa on Jun 27, 2011

    I totally agree, the taste of fresh vegetables and fruits are forever changed.
    Grrrrrrrreat poem.

  • Netty net on Jul 31, 2011

    Cute Poem.

  • shibashish mohanty on Feb 2, 2012


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