Its good to relax sometimes.

A tightly packed suitcase

With contents vying for space

They spill over with a prod or turn

A rigmarole and all undone.

Do not your days with schedules pack

Leave blank spaces on your rack

And congratulate yourself a while

Things will join its rank and file.

Avoid the queue out there

Rats are racing everywhere

With time you will handle your gear

Your moment will surely make you spur.

With a countenance so glum and taut

Don’t betray yourself among the lot

Gleeful looks a monkey face

Emulate , and enhance your grace.

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  • jamesjames7817 on Feb 6, 2010

    you’re right! being happy and be relax is also a choice of everyone.thanks for this wonderful sharing!

  • diyakapoor on Feb 6, 2010

    very good tips, thanks for sharing

  • amandeep13 on Feb 6, 2010

    Great Work

    Well Done

  • seoprofessional on Feb 6, 2010

    very well written

  • lillyrose on Feb 6, 2010

    Lovely poem Wonder!

  • drelayaraja on Feb 6, 2010

    I am happy and relaxed.. Nice writing friend.

  • Aiyanna on Feb 6, 2010

    Happiness and relaxation go hand in hand :-) Nice write, thank you for the share !!! :)

  • Rakesh HP on Feb 6, 2010

    Nice poetic style,
    pack – rack, while- file nice matching words
    thanks for this wonderful sharing!

  • sambhafusia on Feb 6, 2010

    wonderful sharing with good tips………

  • albert1jemi on Feb 6, 2010

    lovely poem

  • Starpisces on Feb 6, 2010

    after reading your wonderful poem, I feel happy and relaxed..
    :)

  • VTech on Feb 6, 2010

    Good Post, Thanks For Sharing.

  • Ruby Hawk on Feb 6, 2010

    Wonderful advise, smile and the world smiles with you. cry and you cry alone.

  • qasimdharamsy on Feb 7, 2010

    Nice one….

  • alensmith on Feb 7, 2010

    be happy and let the world be happy lol

  • T. S. GARP on Feb 7, 2010

    Well said, nice poem!

  • Eunice Tan on Feb 8, 2010

    Be happy is essential for our life.

  • ganeshgolha on Feb 8, 2010

    Great one! Its interesting.. keep it up. N thanks , Kindly go through my rest of articles also& give feedback to my work your valuable feedback will help me to improve my writing skills.

  • CA Johnson on Feb 9, 2010

    This is really great. We should take the time to relax. It will do wonders (pardon the pun) for all of us.

  • Jane Jane on Feb 10, 2010

    well done. positive aura.

  • ladydryle on Feb 10, 2010

    wonderful written…great post..thanks for sharing this to us…:)

  • standingproud on Feb 11, 2010

    I liked very much.
    happy happy
    smiles

  • ganeshgolha on Feb 11, 2010

    Great share! Nice work, also give feedback to my work your valuable feedback will help me to improve my writing skills.

  • clickmarbin on Feb 12, 2010

    nice work, kudos!

  • swatilohani on Feb 24, 2010

    cool tips on how to unwind

  • ISHAN on Mar 5, 2010

    Awesome…thats what I need to do now………Keep writing..!!

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