Be More Disciplined

Starpisces on Oct 13, 2010

Tags: discipline, dogs, nice, priority, queue, reciprocate

What are the dogs queuing for?

What are the dogs there doing?

I find them so well-disciplined

If dogs can be so cooperative

Why not we human beings?

Be patient, what you want? Tell me

But take your number please

I have so many to entertain, so busy

Oh you need my attention immediately

Wait, why must you be in first priority?

Come on, please show your empathy

You are human being, me too, why I must hurry?

If you are nice to me, I will be nice to you surely

Even if you are King or Queen, handsome or pretty

I don’t bother, it takes two to clap, one hand not easy

So, be nice to me, and I will be nicer to you definitely

I don’t mean you are a dog, just happen that the dogs are now queuing

Though till now I don’t know what are they queuing for, that’s so funny

my recent post :

http://authspot.com/poetry/hurray-hurray/

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Starpisces on Oct 13, 2010
Hi Friends! Thanks for your comments in advance!

Also, don’t miss my recent poem “Hurray Hurray”
http://authspot.com/poetry/hurray-hurray/

(hehe, nowadays, I learn to promote articles for survival, hohoho).
Brewed Coffee on Oct 13, 2010
Hahaha! That is funny Star! I wish people are as disciplined as those doggies
drelayaraja on Oct 13, 2010
Your articles never need promotion.. they are very good to read…
pattiann on Oct 13, 2010
I liked this poem very much. My dog is ferocious, not at all like the dogs in the picture you posted. But my husband loved her and my daughter loves her, thus, alas, I can’t get rid of her.
TwiKnight on Oct 13, 2010
My dog could seriously learn something from this, the little monster it had always been. Like drelayaraja put it, your stuff don’t need your hand in promotion; so darn good are most of them people would be willing enough to handle everything without question. Hehehe…
Val Mills on Oct 13, 2010
Lol, where oh where do you find your pictures!!!! This one is so good and your poem speaks the truth. Wonderful work. We used to have a big fat labrador like the one third from the left
Carol M Creasey on Oct 13, 2010
That is lovely, many thanks.
Rehoboth on Oct 13, 2010
$- nice images-$
Temjen Imchen on Oct 13, 2010
Lovely poem and it goes so well with your picture.
GodsGrace on Oct 13, 2010
Good post
SharifaMcFarlane on Oct 13, 2010
They were all promised steaks
Anuradha Ramkumar on Oct 13, 2010
Very cute image and an excellent write.
Michal Dorcak on Oct 13, 2010
Haha, the picture is so funny. As for the writing itself, it I liked it too.
Videomark on Oct 13, 2010
That top picture is absolutely brilliant.
awesome11 on Oct 13, 2010
Well Written
SuperMember on Oct 13, 2010
great share
plz comment on my last articles
Francois Hagnere on Oct 13, 2010
This is a lovely poem. Such a cute photo. Loved it, thank you my friend.
Saurav Banerjee on Oct 13, 2010
That’s a great picture upfront followed by a lovely poem.
R.Laws on Oct 13, 2010
Well-written with great pictures!
albert1jemi on Oct 13, 2010
beautiful one
CA Johnson on Oct 13, 2010
I really enjoyed this. I wish that people were more disciplined too.
cmanjuc on Oct 13, 2010
Image suits the context, Great
LCM Linda on Oct 14, 2010
Very interesting. Love this piece. Great share.
Jessie Will on Oct 14, 2010
Awesome poem and the picture just hits the bull’s eye! (or should I say, the bulldog’s eye, haha

There is a nice quote: ‘properly trained, a man can be dog’s best friend’ (Corey Ford)
papaleng on Oct 14, 2010
nicely done poem.
Phoenix Montoya on Oct 14, 2010
Awesome pic lol… They are so disciplined and a very nice poem Star. Another good post!
Jimmy Shilaho on Oct 14, 2010
You made me smile after a very long day. Thank you.
Christine Ramsay on Oct 14, 2010
That’s an amazing piece and I love the picture.

Christine
Sharif Ishnin on Oct 15, 2010
I think it is obvious why they queue. They are waiting for durians to drop. Hilarious as ever StarP.

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