Beaten Brutally

Will Davis on Sep 9, 2008

Tags: beatings, Fight, Kink

Hit me where it most hurts.

Hit me in the head
Hit me in the gut
Hit me where it most hurts
Beat me soft
Beat me hard
Leave me in the dirt
The only way
I feel alive
Is when someone makes me hurt

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Allison Jae on Sep 11, 2008
Simple but disturbing, even sad. Very good poem. Keep it up. Will be reading more.
hillbilly herman on Sep 12, 2008
remind of some the nuckle heads back on the hills, youd think they would get enough once you beat a couple times but they just lunkheads or it just might mean a boxers victory it opens the mind to alot good job
PennyLouise on Sep 1, 2009
Lying in the dirt you know your place,

In knowing your place is security and comfort.

By hurting you feel,

By feeling you live.

Penny-Louise

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