Beating Each Other Up

ceegirl on Apr 8, 2010

Tags: animosity, beating each other up, Cool, lift the tension, rage foolish, tension

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Only one with all the rage.

Beating each other up

A lot of tension and animosity between the two

it’s mainly one with all the rage acting foolish

Need to keep they cool

They just want to lift the tension and animosity within the two

So they don’t beat each other up.

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Comments (20)

Jimmy Shilaho on Apr 8, 2010
Very true.
yes me on Apr 8, 2010
Wise words Cee g. cheers
Guy Hogan on Apr 8, 2010
This poem has so much truth and sadness in it.
cardy on Apr 8, 2010
A good write liked you’re thoughts in this one thanks for the share.
Shamyl on Apr 8, 2010
Cool nice and clean poem. What were you thinking when you wrote this poem ? You must be in a sober mood. Good one !!!
8Shei8 on Apr 8, 2010
Nicely said!
Stan Wilson on Apr 8, 2010
very true,
Hepsi.M on Apr 8, 2010
very well-said and great write
CA Johnson on Apr 8, 2010
This was a great poem. It is true that the one who has the rage is foolish.
Olive B. on Apr 8, 2010
just about right.
lillyrose on Apr 9, 2010
great expressive poem…maybe dancing would release the tension better!
drelayaraja on Apr 9, 2010
Well said.
Snooky on Apr 9, 2010
try a little tenderness
good work
loveableseth on Apr 9, 2010
good poem but short one
Melody SJAL on Apr 10, 2010
Short and to the point.
Will Gray on Apr 10, 2010
So much truth in so few words. Wonderful!
R G Lowry on Apr 10, 2010
Very true, good piece
R G Lowry on Apr 10, 2010
Very true, good piece.
PictureOne on Apr 10, 2010
nice!
crucisis on Apr 11, 2010
thats true. domestic violence is a huge problem. But i think the situation is more difficult because people go ahead with it and defend the situation.
All need to keep their cool.

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