I’d rather have a pretty heart than having pretty face with a filthy heart.

         Beautiful face

        Naive , killing ,smiling eyes

       Innocent wild side.

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  • Vinaya says good bye on Jan 28, 2012

    “Innocent wild side,” wonderful choice of expression.

  • mphsglo on Jan 28, 2012

    Very nice.

  • Nidhi Rai on Jan 28, 2012

    A beautiful heart is more important than a beautiful face.

  • sanataryal on Jan 28, 2012

    Angel, a beautiful creation once again. Enjoy.

  • Dora77 on Jan 28, 2012

    A Beautiful Face invites attraction,A beautiful heart Invites Love.

    Well said Angel

  • AmosTheCat on Jan 28, 2012

    Sounds like my younger daughter. Even looks like her.

  • Avik Chattopadhyay on Jan 28, 2012

    very well said…

  • ittech on Jan 28, 2012

    Good to learn about it.

  • mhassanmemon on Jan 29, 2012

    Another beautiful haiku.

  • Martin Kloess on Jan 29, 2012

    very good

  • Nidhi Rai on Jan 29, 2012

    Good one.

  • iva75cpb on Jan 29, 2012

    :)

  • Aroosa Gloomy on Jan 29, 2012

    great

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