Perfect imperfections.

Beautiful Flaws

Those wide sharp eyes

Speaks of the truth and never lie

Those ragged hands

Caresses with tender love you cannot hide

That scraggy chest

Where I’d laid my head for comfort

Those skinny legs

Walks with me when I’m mad

Those long arms

Shield and hide me from tears

That grumpy voice

Telling me “dear, you have a choice”

Beautiful Flaws

Hiding from Veil

Flaws outshines from the trail

But shaft of lights unravel its

Perfect Imperfections.

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  • LoveDoctor on Aug 15, 2010

    This is really good.

  • tlm7573 on Aug 15, 2010

    Well done…

  • Joseph Scott on Aug 15, 2010

    Agreed, great poem!

  • Anuradha Ramkumar on Aug 15, 2010

    Lovely poem.

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Aug 16, 2010

    I love that, perfect imperfections, beautiful flaws!

  • melphens on Aug 16, 2010

    I love it! im imagining myself being perfect imperfection from this, im inspired reading this.

  • Christine Ramsay on Aug 16, 2010

    What a wonderful description. Well written.

    Christine

  • Lord Banks on Aug 16, 2010

    I liked that good imagery. LB

  • flowerrose on Aug 16, 2010

    Nice post. I like it and thank my friend
    Flowerrose

  • Likha on Aug 16, 2010

    I love the contradictions. I like this.

  • Anj M on Aug 16, 2010

    Beautiful :)

  • papaleng on Aug 16, 2010

    just so beautiful.

  • suhail on Aug 16, 2010

    i had a fun time reading it so thanks !

  • PARAM on Aug 16, 2010

    Great poem..

  • 1hopefulman on Aug 16, 2010

    Where there is love, imperfections don’t matter. I enjoyed reading it.

  • giftarist on Aug 16, 2010

    That’s one excellent write, kabayan. Thumbs up!

  • Tulan on Aug 16, 2010

    We are all beautiful in our way.

  • wonder on Aug 17, 2010

    This is excellent!

  • RayFree on Aug 17, 2010

    Yea its funny how a beautiful spirit can make the flesh so attractive

  • john tugano on Aug 18, 2010

    i love this..great perfect imperfections..

  • L R Humphries on Aug 18, 2010

    One of the best poems I have read on here. I particularly liked: –

    ‘Those ragged hands

    Caresses with tender love you cannot hide’

    Beautiful.

  • carissimi on Aug 18, 2010

    loved it!

  • Phoenix Montoya on Aug 19, 2010

    Love is not perfect but for a person who is really in love it is always perfect. Pinaikot ko lang lol… Good poem, Heidie.

  • Lipstick on Aug 22, 2010

    how sweet it is to find beauty in imperfections
    must be love :)

  • manilatop10 on Aug 27, 2010

    Like a teddy bear that grows fonder as it gets “aged” we learn to appreciate the company of those that accept our flaws and their own diba? … gaining comfort and aid from ugly beauty :)

  • manilatop10 on Aug 27, 2010

    Like a teddy bear that grows fonder as it gets ‘aged’ we learn to appreciate the company of those that accept our flaws and their own diba? … gaining comfort and aid from ugly beauty :)

  • manilatop10 on Aug 27, 2010

    Like a teddy bear that grows fonder as it gets AGED we learn to appreciate the company of those that accept our flaws and their own diba? … gaining comfort and aid from ugly beauty :)

  • manilatop10 on Aug 27, 2010

    Like a teddy bear that grows fonder as it gets AGED, perhaps we learn to appreciate the company of those that accept our flaws and their own diba … gaining comfort and aid from ugly beauty.

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