Love is immortal.

Departing hearts
Sweet, parting sorrow
Lost in melancholy
Time on borrow
Taking you from me
But farewell is temporal
For I will part the sea
My gallant admiral
To lie next to thee
Our flesh reunited
In tragic ecstasy
Of love united
In sublime tragedy

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  • ken bultman on Aug 17, 2009

    Gee, it sounds like one or both are lost at sea. Nice poem.

  • Collette Edwards on Aug 17, 2009

    great read i liked the flo keep writting :)

  • Christine Ramsay on Aug 17, 2009

    That is so beautiful. You have a real talent.

    Christine

  • kathie107 on Aug 17, 2009

    Really nice poem, i liked it

  • Melody SJAL on Aug 17, 2009

    Awesome!

  • Ruby Hawk on Aug 17, 2009

    lovely,

  • Shirley Shuler on Aug 17, 2009

    Hi Lady Sunshine, what a beautiful tragedy indeed!!

  • giftarist on Aug 17, 2009

    Beautiful! Keep it coming lady sunshine! You have another great piece

  • Jenny Heart on Aug 18, 2009

    Great free flowing emotions. Like it!

  • Lostash on Aug 18, 2009

    …..and a beautiful poem once again Lady!

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