Beauty and the Yeast

StumbleUponWriter on Jun 25, 2009

Tags: aura, bad attitude, Beauty, health, men and women, Poetry, purity

A poetry on a general topic on beauty. How beautiful one is, (both gender), if matched with a bad attitude, is just a bad aura altogether…

Your beauty is pure, light and true as the white mountain,
Nothing can stop you,
No one can outdo you,
However, the one thing about you,
Is that although you possess purity and beauty,
You are just like the yeast,
Beauty on the outside and mouldy inside,
Oh, how I wish this ain’t true…

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clay hurtubise on Jun 25, 2009
lol, I thought for sure this would be about either bread or beer!
Good work.
Thanks,
Clay
RS Wing on Jun 26, 2009
lol…This is your funniest poem I’ve read….I think I know who it could be directed too, (not personally), cool read bro…really like the title, very creative and sharply pointed. I always like a fine sharpened pencil to write with, I think you may have sharpened this point with a blade….good work my friend!
RS Wing on Jun 26, 2009
Re-reading this…your sub-title makes so much more sense.
kate smedley on Jun 26, 2009
That is inspired … and very true, great title!
Darla Cooke on Jun 26, 2009
Very interesting.
Tanya Wallace on Jun 26, 2009
Excellent poem,really humourous,original and creative.I love poem’s that make me smile and this one sure did.greta work stumbleuponwriter.
StumbleUponWriter on Jun 26, 2009
Thanks a lot, all friends..you guys rock!
All your comments made me smile and chuckle too ..
Thanks for the encouragement so far, I will try to do better next time onwards…

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