A totally devastated heart.

It’s pouring, raining
Tears are welling
Sadness that I felt
No place to hide
Shelter of love
Ruined, abandoned
Trodden reputation
A deserted heart
It was your beauty
That captured my heart
Never that I thought
You’re fooling around
No matter how I regret
There’s nothing I can do
Your hugs and your kisses
Never again to be felt

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Comments (13)
  • tracy sardelli on Apr 16, 2008

    very sad, but very good.

  • nobert soloria bermosa on Apr 16, 2008

    thanks a lot Tracy,

  • Judy Sheldon on Apr 16, 2008

    Nobert, This is a beautiful emotional poem. I hope it is creative, and not real, however. I do not wish you such heartbreak.

  • Ruby Hawk on Apr 16, 2008

    A beautiful heartfelt poem, Take care, Ruby

  • nobert soloria bermosa on Apr 16, 2008

    hi there Ruby,
    thanks a lot for dropping and posting a comment,
    take care and God Bless

  • quiet voice on Apr 17, 2008

    ..Hi, makes me a little teary,
    good job. A lot of us go through
    this, hurts, but we grow, take care.

  • nobert soloria bermosa on Apr 18, 2008

    ..hi there
    thanks quiet voice

  • salvatore on Apr 19, 2008

    very sad, but good at the same time

  • nobert soloria bermosa on Apr 19, 2008

    hi salvatore,
    thank to you,

  • Lucy Lockett on Apr 19, 2008

    There is an intensity in these words that well up on the inside, very well written even though it sad.

  • nobert soloria bermosa on Apr 19, 2008

    thanks Lucy,
    it’s actually one of the saddest poem i wrote..

  • Darlene McFarlane on Apr 19, 2008

    Another pleasure to read. I felt the sadness and passion in your words.

    Great job.

  • nobert soloria bermosa on Apr 19, 2008

    thank you for your wonderful comment Darlene.
    it inspire me to write more,thanks

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