Becoming a Vampire

Darla Cooke on Jun 23, 2009

Tags: blood, creature, fangs, horror, neck, night, vampire

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A vampire poem.

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I was bitten by a gigantic bat.

Soon I will become a vampire.

My skin will turn real clammy.

I will be a creature of the night.

My teeth will grow into fangs.

I’ll need human blood to survive.

I will bite my victim on the neck,

while controlling their minds.

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Deep Blue on Jun 23, 2009
Awesome imagination.
Kairos on Jun 23, 2009
ken bultman on Jun 23, 2009
Scary stuff.
kate smedley on Jun 23, 2009
I love your vampire poems!
STEVE666 on Jun 23, 2009
You can bite my neck anytime, Darla
stumbleuponwriter on Jun 23, 2009
This is scary, which means it’s a good one from you. You manage to conjure that scary feel through the words. Nice one, Darla..
Allana Calhoun on Jun 23, 2009
heh heh. Oh how many of us have imagined becoming a vampire like this. Cute poem.
Francy on Jun 23, 2009
very well done Darla…like it
Keep sharing.
rajeev bhargava on Jun 23, 2009
your vampire poems are BRILLIANT and 100% entertaining. i loved it completely.
rajeev bhargava on Jun 23, 2009
your vampire poems are BRILLIANT and 100% entertaining. i loved it completely.
clay hurtubise on Jun 23, 2009
Nice one! (I was going to say it sucked…!:) )
Thanks,
Clay
Count Valandingham on Jun 23, 2009
That surely describes a vampire perfectly. Thank God I am not one. Nicely done..
jacob on Jun 23, 2009
oo nice read anne rice much? close semblance of her ideaology on vampires
irishpen on Jun 23, 2009
I seem to be seeing Vampires EVERYWHERE lately!! odd! Great poem!
CutestPrincess on Jul 10, 2009
very entertaining piece…

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