Just a run with a few threads.

Beelzebub was smoking n joking!

As the folk around him laughed!!

Or else were giggling….

The moon was sulphur red…

With the gates of hell wide open.

While,

All around the globe

The kids were running here

Hiding there!

Screaming in their lost UN sheltered need

Beelzebub sneered….

When the wise spun threads of truth.

As,

The teenagers poked their wicked lines

Beelzebub smirked….

Bent his back to  their work?

A hollow run of laughter….

Followed down their new, but weary road

Beelzebub, made ready for his new flock.

All those who carry on in Beelzebub’s way’s

Shall have have Beelzebub day’s

That last the length of time its self

In the horror’s of their own scorn

Pain, anguish, terror, burning, smouldering,

Itching, twitching, maggot festered flesh their beauty!!

The length and breadth of Time Enjoy!

Your sentence should you wish it HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!

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Comments (10)
  • Jimmy Shilaho on Jul 7, 2010

    A very strong shout Matt, loved it.

  • Belinda Dobie on Jul 7, 2010

    Sad but true.

  • giftarist on Jul 7, 2010

    Intense write, friend.

  • Ruby Hawk on Jul 7, 2010

    So many sad things out there to grab our kids. It’s a parents nightmare.

  • Tulan on Jul 7, 2010

    Deep and dark, Well penned as always,.

  • Rohit19 on Jul 7, 2010

    I liked the theme very much!

  • Christine Ramsay on Jul 8, 2010

    This is a powerful little run. Matt. I loved it.

    Christine

  • Atanacio on Jul 8, 2010

    i enjoyed this little run great job Matt

  • Sweety on Jul 9, 2010

    Very good theme. Is this name from the Bible character?

  • LewSethics on Jul 14, 2010

    That evil laughter at the end was kind of spooky there, bud.
    (By the way, should “Shall have have Beelzebub day’s” be
    “Shall have half Beelzebub day’s”? Or something?)

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