Before The Dawn Breaks (Haiku)

Angelji on Jan 26, 2012

Tags: breaks, dawn, hurry up, L love you

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No time ever wasted, for the things which we enjoyed doing.

I love you baby ,

Let’s hurry up and do it

Before the dawn breaks .

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Comments (14)

dazzlejazz on Jan 26, 2012
LOVE it!!! Great photo to go with it too.
girishpuri on Jan 27, 2012
nice
mdrkarim7 on Jan 27, 2012
Beautiful…
AmosTheCat on Jan 27, 2012
Nice poem. Good thought.
Nidhi Rai on Jan 27, 2012
This is so sweet.
iva75cpb on Jan 27, 2012
Cute, actually. And the mistery remains, “do it…” without specifiying what. I like that.
iva75cpb on Jan 27, 2012
Cute, actually. And the mistery remains, “do it…” without specifiying what. I like that. Make love, or turn Belle into a blood sucker…
Dora77 on Jan 27, 2012
Picture Speaks a thousand words and Silence is golden often….Very nice
mhassanmemon on Jan 27, 2012
Beautiful haiku…
aheed411 on Jan 27, 2012
Nice
Vinaya says good bye on Jan 27, 2012
Loved the hidden meaning
sanna on Jan 27, 2012
Such a sweet thought.
MJRapp on Jan 27, 2012
Very nice
lucia anna on Jan 29, 2012
Yes, very nice

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