“l’m with you now and I’ll never leave you, until you say.”

Loneliness is not such a bad emotion;

regard it as a friend, be it a he or a she,

who is always nearby and is felt only by you.

Whenever you are feeling down and low,

you can hear loneliness whispering in your ear,

“I’m with you now and I’ll never leave you, until you say.”

Comforting words to make one befriend loneliness,

in times of solace,  when you need someone close to you;

you can always depend on loneliness to appear…

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  • CHIPMUNK on Nov 4, 2011

    loneliness makes you sad if you don’t choose to be alone

  • okkhattak on Nov 4, 2011

    good

  • Phoenix Montoya on Nov 4, 2011

    The title is sad, the content is more lonesome but very true. We can all count on loneliness to be with us always…. Still, I love happiness to be more at my side.

  • FX777222999 on Nov 4, 2011

    Yes it is true. Loneliness is a part of happiness.

  • CA Johnson on Nov 7, 2011

    I really enjoyed this. Loneliness can be a good thing because it gives you time to think and be creative. Some people need to be alone to handle their emotions. It does not always have to be a bad thing. It depends on how you see it.

  • beingwell on Nov 8, 2011

    Interesting.

  • athena goodlight on Nov 14, 2011

    Let loneliness be a tension point at which you can jump off towards happiness.

  • beingwell on Nov 17, 2011

    Not my first visit…

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