"l’m with you now and I’ll never leave you, until you say."

Loneliness is not such a bad emotion;

regard it as a friend, be it a he or a she,

who is always nearby and is felt only by you.

Whenever you are feeling down and low,

you can hear loneliness whispering in your ear,

“l’m with you now and I’ll never leave you, until you say.”

Comforting words to make one befriend loneliness,

in times of solace,  when you need someone close to you;

you can always depend on loneliness to appear…

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  • Ramalingam on Nov 24, 2009

    interesting.

  • LoveDoctor on Nov 24, 2009

    very nice. well-done:)

  • wonder on Nov 24, 2009

    A very mature write up.Excellent.

  • Pinaki Ghosh on Nov 24, 2009

    great write

  • Butterfly Musings on Nov 24, 2009

    very beautiful!! and haunting

  • Linda Lori on Nov 25, 2009

    Nice write!

  • ken bultman on Nov 25, 2009

    Lonliness leaving makes one happy.

  • Priyanka Bhowmick on Nov 25, 2009

    dats a gud positive attitude towards loneliness ,well i do feel the same .its my best frnd….lovely poem!!

  • Darla Cooke on Nov 25, 2009

    Very nice poem!

  • Mark Gordon Brown on Nov 25, 2009

    I live on 10 acres in the middle of nowhere I hate the friend named loneliness, I get sad when my wife is at work and I am home alone, although the animals are good company its not the same.

  • CA Johnson on Nov 25, 2009

    This is really good, rajeev. You gave people a wonderful way to look at loneliness. I don’t really like to be alone, but I see that it’s not such a bad thing thanks to you.

  • PhoenixRox on Nov 26, 2009

    Hi Rajeev, this is truly a way most people would not think. It is amazing that you have this vision. I will keep this with me. I smiled right through this one.

  • Kate Smedley on Nov 26, 2009

    That\’s a very interesting way of looking at loneliness, very nicely done Rajeev.

  • Pithom on Nov 26, 2009

    I quite like loneliness myself… and like the idea of living in the middle of nowhere surrounded by nobody and nature. I think better by myself. Thanks.

  • Puja on Dec 2, 2009

    Nicely done!

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