My feelings on “reality”.

Do you really see, what your eyes lead you to believe?
Or do you mark the path, that your vision achieves?
Is a apple an apple because thats the name given?
Or could it be a sphere, an orange, or both wrapped in red linen?
Is the sun really hot as it sheds light there in the sky
or is really just so cold that the numbing frost hides away yet another lie.
How is it you say this life we live is real?
When no one knows how death really feels?
Looking behind stained glass I hesitate no more to ask.
could this all be a dream and this so called death be waking at last?

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  • Jadey on Jun 29, 2009

    Its so deep, and states the truth. I love the style you wrote this in. It is amazing :D

  • Drew Pace on Feb 4, 2011

    Thanks I write from the heart, didn’t realize I had comments sorry
    Im glad you like tho :D

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