A poem slightly twisted from my ex’s point of view, Written June 11th, 2007.

 A world full of destruction

What is our purpose?

All we do is destroy each other

Will we ever be at peace?

Fighting is what I grew with

Why is it all I know?

You taught me nothing but pain

Will I ever know the feeling of love?

This music screams to me words of hate

I’ll never know the feeling of happiness

Why can’t I love?

A feeling unknown burns inside me

Who is she?

I cant figure out what this feeling is

She makes me feel different.

Is it love?

I’m so confused

Yet I enjoy this feeling

She’s beautiful

Why is she so pretty?

I can’t figure it out

I look her in the eyes

Take her fragile hands

And I tell her I love her

Knowing deep in my dark heart

That it’s true

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  • Renee Hudson on May 7, 2011

    This is certainly different. I like it, just gotta try and figure it out now lol. But you deffinately do have a very beautiful way of portraying things.

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