This is how I felt last year when I almost came down with pneumonia.

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I’m burning up with a fever,

my temperature is 104 degrees.

My throat is raw and sore,

I’m starting to feel nauseous.

I’m having some dizzy spells,

feeling lightheaded and weak.

My energy is decreasing,

I can barely stand up now.

I’l be spending many hours in bed,

perspiring beneath the covers.

This is going to be a long night.

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  • lh on Jun 27, 2009

    glad u recovered too

  • Melody SJAL on Jun 27, 2009

    You have captured the experience well.

  • ken bultman on Jun 27, 2009

    Sounded like a rough go. Glad it passed.

  • Deep Blue on Jun 27, 2009

    Nice poetry.

  • mdartist on Jun 27, 2009

    Bless your heart! Hope someone was there with you to help take care of you! Take care. Nice poem.

  • goodselfme on Jun 27, 2009

    Well explained.glad you are alright now and that you recovered well.

  • rajeev bhargava on Jun 28, 2009

    a very powerful poem described so well. i’m glad you’re feeling better now and fully recovered.

  • kate smedley on Jun 29, 2009

    How horrible, so glad you recovered!

  • STEVE666 on Jun 29, 2009

    You had it rough, Darla

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