Well written poem. Fiction, of course.

Even if the couple are imaginary, I feel sorry for them.

it’s good. Even a strong loving couple will hve their moments of struggle.

Take Care, DreamSweet and Let your Heart Shine
~ milty

You made a picture with words : ) and you\’ve done it in a way that makes it real…I like it : )

Well done, I enjoyed reading your poem.

I feel sorry for them

fiction for you and I’m so glad of that, But all to real to so many, when the lust is gone and they relize there is no love, all that’s left is hate and anger. yes it’s time to walk away and with luck no children to get hurt because of it all. yet most likely there is always children who suffer most

Excellent write and topic Darla! I think virtually every relationship goes through these so called bad times,you just have to work through them unless of course you do hate each other and then there really is not point in taking it any further.

when this happens the love is gone and they need to walk away..

great poem, i usually am not impressed but this one is very impressing!!

Well done Darla pretty much sums up a bad marriage.

Well written. Not sure if this is fiction, or you capturing in words an angry moment.