Beneath the Waves

Tarra Buluran on Mar 16, 2009

Tags: waves

When someone has taken you for granted, it’s hard to revive one’s trust and commitment.

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Beneath the waves

You pulled me down

My breath withheld

A thousand times.

Beneath the waves

You kissed goodbye

My heart dreamed on

But never I tried.

Beneath the waves

I was trapped alone

And beyond those dark tides

Memories pierced my bones.

Beneath the waves

You came back again

Love was proposed

Behind those silly whirls.

Beneath the waves

My love still rested in hue

But I’d rather stay, whichever way

Than regret whatever comes in deep blue gray.

Beneath the waves

Despite the effort you made

I’d rather keep my love away

Than comes the day it’d be myself to blame.

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Kairos on Mar 16, 2009
Uhh, I hope many women are like you…
Lorenzo A. Fernandez Jr. on Mar 16, 2009
I guess this is what the game of love is all about….
xenah on Mar 16, 2009
Almost all women are faithful and one-man woman. I knew it for I am one of those. And I salute you for being another one too.
Mr Ghaz on Mar 17, 2009
Excellent! That was great tarra! very attractive as well. nice pics.
Christine Ramsay on Mar 17, 2009
Good for you. Why should we be taken for granted? A lovely poem.

Christine
Melody SJAL on Mar 17, 2009
Lovely words…nice photo too.
Duff D Moss on Mar 17, 2009
Effective analogy
amilia snow on Mar 17, 2009
I can understand your feelings…i hope that one day, we\’ll wake up to a better reality. I like that photo lots~
CutestPrincess on Mar 17, 2009
that was really breathtaking and true to life. i really enjoyed this poem a lot
Suppee XX on Mar 17, 2009
I enjoyed the image- sometimes you do feel you are drowning when in this situation…
rajeev bhargava on Mar 19, 2009
i really enjoyed reading this poem. the wordings were very powerful and directly from the heart. Excellent!
OhSugar on Mar 19, 2009
I know that I am going to enjoy your works. I like your style of poetry. This is beautifully written with feeling that lifts from the page. I love it.

Thanks for adding me as your friend.
Michael Eboh on Mar 20, 2009
You are just creative no doubt. I like that. Thanks.
Unofre Pili on Mar 21, 2009
Very fine imagery. You’re a wise woman.
Elizabeth Abbott on Mar 24, 2009
Beautiful….melancholy…inspiring..compeles me to write. Thank you. E
kate smedley on Mar 28, 2009
Lovely imagery and very wise words.
Will Gray on Mar 28, 2009
Excellent! I can relate very well to this.
payge on Mar 29, 2009
Can relate to this very well…great imagry and a great poem.Really enjoyed reading it.
Christine Bautista on Apr 10, 2009
A very nice poem… Can’t remember the last time I’ve read a poem & about love too.. Nice read for a hopeless romantic like me.. Nice work from a hopeless romantic too(”,)
Svetlana Cherevik on Nov 28, 2009
very strong and very beautiful. Great work

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