A poem about addiction beyond the point of redemption…

On the heels of death

through bleakest night,

its various, ale soaked bars;

where sorrows drown

in hand held seas,

that tilt towards the stars.

Where those of yearning,

through false wisdom,

seek a solace in the tides;

their remnants swept,

by waves of impulse,

that mark the passing of their time.

They share in fables of a lifetime,

every thought, 

its word or deed;

each memoir altered

by a longing,

and it’s voracious, deep set need;

and talk of love,

its place, and theirs,

is futile as the day;

the sum of union,

has no bearing

upon single lives at play.

And though they share

the day’s pink embers,

in the consort of their kin;

they are forlorn

in all but number,

and the warmth that sears the rim. 

Though their solitude

is freedom, it 

is in freedom they are bound;

cast as shadow

into sunlight,

their contours merged with gilded ground.

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Comments (10)
  • Raj the Tora on Sep 26, 2010

    very good poem

  • Brewed Coffee on Sep 26, 2010

    Very poignant. Beautifully expressed emotions.

  • addjust on Sep 26, 2010

    Now thats a quality poem

  • melphens on Sep 27, 2010

    like this one! ;)

  • L R Humphries on Sep 27, 2010

    Cheers folks, I appreciate the reads and the comments.

    Take care, Lew

  • Ethics0006 on Sep 27, 2010

    Nice Poem

  • L R Humphries on Sep 27, 2010

    Cheers Ethics, am so glad that you enjoyed ;-)

    Take care

    Lew

  • LewSethics on Sep 27, 2010

    “the sum of union,

    has no bearing

    upon single lives at play.”

    Again, great meter, I especially like this line.

  • L R Humphries on Sep 28, 2010

    Cheers Lew, glad you enjoyed.

    Take care

    Lew

  • Freedom Rising on Oct 5, 2010

    Brilliant!

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