Best friends are treasured forever.

I have lost the best friend I ever had

I lost him when I said bye to dad

I could always count of him being there

even if I was being selfish or unfair

My dad polished me up like a bright penny

dampened my self doubt so there was not any

he was just so kind and fatherly

and of course the best friend to me

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  • SJ FLETCHER on Jan 9, 2010

    i really like this poem thanks for the read. if u want u can look at some of my work and i am open to cs ommment

  • SJ FLETCHER on Jan 9, 2010

    I really like this poem thanks for the read. If u want u can look at some of my work and i am open to comments

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