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Better Me
It’s time to change
It’s time to leave it all behind
Become something better
Someone who is stronger
I need to change it all
Or just most
I need to be stronger
More in control of myself
More in control of everything
If that’s possible
I just need to
It’s pass time
For this change
Just help me
Become a better me

Murdered Heart
There’s a sickness in my heart 
A murder scene on the floor 
And a girl torn about 
With the knife nowhere on the shores

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