Determination is the deciding factor between if a person will fail or succeed. If you are determined the world is yours, but the minute you give up failure will be there to give you a warm welcome.

You won’t break me.

I’ll stand toe to toe with you,

Look you square in the eyes and say,

“You won’t break me.”

I am a man strongly invested,

In the undeniable truth,

That I will succeed,

No matter what cost or consequence,

I will achieve.

Stand in my way,

I’ll go around you.

Block the path around,

I’ll go through you.

No matter what you do,

I can’t be stopped,

Because I am destined to be,

One of the chosen few.

The few who won’t be 

Deterred by petty schemes,

The few who know

Things aren’t always what the seem.

The chosen few,

Who make life

Better than dreams.

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  • lxdollarsxl on Jan 6, 2012

    Having that determination is good, but it alone does not bring success – happiness and health are needed too, with a smattering of love thrown in.

  • caribbean369 on Jan 6, 2012

    This is a VERY good poem!

  • erwinkennythomas on Jan 6, 2012

    great!

  • realityspeaks on Jan 7, 2012

    Once determined you never give up.

  • jaihoji on Jan 7, 2012

    determination and dedication is the key to success

  • Cyni1106 on Jan 7, 2012

    This poem is very positive, everyone needs this kind of determination, good job.

  • pogi253 on Jan 7, 2012

    you also love poems

  • iva75cpb on Jan 8, 2012

    Such confidence, that it affected me, too. Good job!

  • ittech on Jan 9, 2012

    cool

  • ittech on Jan 9, 2012

    very nice

  • Sebastian Onciu on Jan 9, 2012

    A poem with attitude,indeed!

  • Kristie Claar on Jan 12, 2012

    excellent

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