Between the Needle and the Spoon

Poetic Enigma on Sep 27, 2008

Dark verse, although my life is not dark anymore.

You are stuck between the needle and the spoon
Debating which path to follow to your doom

One is black and white and read all over
The other is completely distorted
You could try to clean the mirror,
but it is not the problem

The mirror itself is fine
What is really wrong is what you have created
That fine line
A distrubtion from reality

Begging to be tortured and tattered
Pleading to be led through blinding darkness again

You are stuck between the needle and the spoon
Debating which path to follow to your doom

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Will Gray on Sep 27, 2008
Dark but emotional. It reminds me of Neil Young’s The Needle And The Damage Done. Very good!
goodselfme on Sep 27, 2008
I like the inferences made. Well written piece!
Fabian C on Sep 28, 2008
This is chilling and a deep reflection on the black culture of destruction. Thanks for sharing.

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