This was written for a couple I knew who were getting divorced, but changed their minds. That was six years ago, and they’re still together and even had a baby after their reconciliation.

Through ravages of pain,
Inside a loving rage,
The forces that once bound us
Unravels just the same.
Though we are lost,
We are not far away,
Dancing through the mist,
Forever our hearts remain.
We’ll never let go of the hope.
In all the rain and snow,
Our warmth eats the cold.
Our story will forever be told.
Take the part
And lay it down.
In this mystical room,
I hear not a sound.
The very place where love began,
Continues now
Just the same,
As we find our way
Through the maze.
So we keep holding on,
Though the road is long.
When other have gone,
We remain here, standing strong.
A pact between two lovers,
A bond unbroken.
In this there can be no others
No indifference spoken.

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Comments (5)
  • Will Davis on Oct 11, 2008

    This one really gets me. I wish things had been diffent on some of the things that happend to me. Brings a tear to my eye.

  • Eric Mendoza on Oct 11, 2008

    I also went through an extremely tough time in my relationship, but I am so glad I stuck it out to see if it was worth it, because to this day it has proven so. We’re not perfect and must understand that sometimes we do things that hurt our loved ones unintentionally, but that doesn’t make it right either.

  • Kiki Stamatiou on Oct 13, 2008

    This is a very nice tribute to love or even to Valentine’s Day,
    which makes it really very beautiful.

    Take Care,

    Kiki Stamatiou (Joanna Maharis)

  • Holly Sendy on Oct 13, 2008

    I love this poem. It reminds me of a time in a past relationship when things got rough…we tried to not let go, but after awhile we drifted apart, but we love each other till this day…

  • leannehume on Nov 4, 2008

    This is such a great poem. i love it!

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