A sort of silly poem about falling in love. you know, sun is brighter, grass is greener sort of thing!

Today I came down with a terrible bout

a sickness that is serious and deadly, no doubt

The doctors say it’s without a cure

and just how I got it, they are unsure

The symptoms are awful

and horrible, I say

You appear to be glowing

all night and all day

You also will experience

a permanent smile

and a continuous happiness

that makes life worthwhile

the worst part of this whole thing

is when your words become muddled

you get all nervous and can’t speak

and turn into a puddle!

But never fear, my friend!

this illness will not bother you

unless you are hopelessly in love

with a love that’s true

for this illness with which I’ve been stricken

happens only when you fall in love,

when you are smitten…

like mittens!!

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  • thestickman on Sep 2, 2009

    Cute! I was last smitten …. by a black kitten! I rescued the kit from the SPCA and that cat was with me for nearly 10 years. Miss that cat even today…

  • ashan1614 on Sep 2, 2009

    I agree, this is cute! :)

  • upnorthreviewer on Sep 3, 2009

    I always kind of thought of love as a disease too! We need to statr researching a drug or something….

  • gianne on Sep 11, 2009

    I love this. It doesn’t feel silly. It feels like love does!

  • LoveDoctorLoveGoodBye on Sep 18, 2009

    nice poem.

  • lduncan824 on Oct 5, 2009

    I love being in love! Great poem.

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