Beyond The Clouds

Sharpedon on Nov 23, 2010

Some men cry, some others lay tears…

High, very high I fly
far beyond the clouds
into the bright blue sky
above the highest grounds

my mind is always here
but my heart is down there
along with you my dear
I hope you are fine and well

I am now entering orbit
you are dressed in white and blue
you are so beautiful it hurts
that I’ll stay away from you

with teardrops in my eyes
I leave you far behind
heading for the red planet
where rust is all I’ll find

for eight years we’ll be afar
I don’t know if I hold out
it tears my heart apart
it makes me wanna SHOUT!

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Comments (12)

Joie Schmidt on Nov 23, 2010
Nice!

Blessings.

Sincerely,

-Joie Schmidt.
albert1jemi on Nov 25, 2010
great share
Sarah Rebecca on Nov 25, 2010
Beautiful share.
Hendrik on Nov 25, 2010
Good. Like the picture!
Sharpedon on Nov 26, 2010
Thank you for your kind comments.
I just noticed that there was a spelling error (Beoyond) in the…title,oops!! :S
Larry Fish on Nov 26, 2010
Very well written poem.
AshleyApathy on Nov 29, 2010
Thanks for the share!
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Phoenix Montoya on Dec 4, 2010
Wonderful write. Some sadness here too, to get separated from a loved one? Well done my friend.
gaby7 on Dec 5, 2010
I liked this! Thanks Shaepedon
Nina Mason on Jan 14, 2011
Very nice poem Sharpedon.
Thank you for adding me. I have added you as well.
Happy publishing!
Nina
andriantoniou on Feb 1, 2011
Strong feelings!
pippe vonkuhne on Feb 26, 2011
Isn’t the red planet Mars? Bit of anger at the end. A great post, thanks Sharpedon. Cmon, do one heading for Venus.

Hi there!