Bhezfrends

Jane Jane on Aug 28, 2009

Tags: bonding, feelings, friendship, fun, Poetry

For Bhezfrends( best friends)…=) hope yah like it..

One fine day of October

We suddenly got together

Feelings just gone better

Everyone seems to feel closer.

Things started out for fun

Uttering “bhez” to anyone we can

Then “bhez-calling” became habitual

‘Til our emotions turned mutual.

Something’s apparently unfolded

A friendship has to be started

“Bhezfrends’ as we call our troupe

It’s gonna be a lifetime group.

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raman13 on Aug 28, 2009
Good work

Keep the good work on

Best Regards
alc on Aug 30, 2009
Terrific write!
Anne McNew on Aug 31, 2009
pag noypi, kahit anong spelling basta katunog ng BESTFRIEND ganon pa rin yon – - tunay na magkakaibigan.

I like this.
Beth Suess on Aug 31, 2009
It’s a very nice article!
Darla Cooke on Sep 1, 2009
A well written poem.
HelloSiti on Sep 1, 2009
Nicely described about your friendship. Hope your friendship will be long lasting forever!
Dena McCusker on Sep 1, 2009
this was a sweet piece..nice work
Buma on Sep 1, 2009
Great write, fun read.
Jenny Heart on Sep 1, 2009
I love it. Heartfelt and true.
Milton H Peebles III on Sep 1, 2009
Like this one muches!
Take Care, DreamSweet and Let Your Heart Shine
~ milty
CA Johnson on Sep 1, 2009
Great poem! What a great dedication to “bhezfriends”. I like that term by the way.
K Kristie on Sep 2, 2009
awww, such a sweet poem. nice work!
Seth Heartnett on Sep 2, 2009
Very nice. Very sweet <3
chantell on Sep 2, 2009
Nice work. Well Said
ducroisjosef on Sep 2, 2009
Your poetry is tremendously fun to read, thanks.
Keep it up, cheers.
Melinda McQueen on Sep 2, 2009
Great poem! It’s always nice to be close to someone.
Eunice Tan on Sep 2, 2009
Your friend will surely love this
wonder on Sep 3, 2009
The title attracted me. There is an underlying emotion.
agriculi on Sep 4, 2009
lovely poem
thestickman on Sep 4, 2009
Silly-fun!
Will Gray on Sep 4, 2009
Good write. Funny.
emmahaynes on Sep 4, 2009
How very lovely! I enjoyed this poem so much, thanks for the share!
jesse lennon on Sep 4, 2009
Hmnn ,I seem a little ah confuzzled,I know what your talkin about but hmmn

*Jesse
livemike on Sep 5, 2009
Very cleverly written….
OhSugar on Sep 6, 2009
A lovely well written poem. I enjoyed reading it.

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