Biggest Losers are Biggest Winners

Poetic Enigma on Feb 13, 2010

Just a little poem about the show the Biggest Loser. Thoughts?

Biggest losers are biggest winners
People starting unhealthy get thinner

They bravely stand on the big ol’ scale
and to the world, their weight they’ll unveil

This seasons contestants are a shock to see
The massive weight accumulated by all the entities

Their stories touch our hearts, and their tragedies shock our mind
Wondering how somebody could treat themselves so unkind

We’ll watch the show in hope of their successes
Praying they’ll never return to their old messes

Most go to the ranch to get back their life,while others go to play the game
Those that just want the money should be ashamed

The biggest loser of all finds a little wealth,
While the rest of the contestants find something to treasure; their health

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Comments (16)

drelayaraja on Feb 13, 2010
Wonderfully written. Nice share.
fragile18 on Feb 13, 2010
nice!
Debra. on Feb 13, 2010
Awesome poem, Enigma! Very well put….your health is what counts most!
Christine Ramsay on Feb 13, 2010
That’s a great poem. I watched the British version of The Biggest Loser last year and it gave me a big incentive to lose weight. I hope to continue this year when it comes on again.

Christine
Kate Smedley on Feb 13, 2010
That’s absolutely true – I love the flow and style of this poem.
seema1962 on Feb 13, 2010
Gr8 work. Only the health that matters first.
Melody SJAL on Feb 13, 2010
That’s very good.
Peter Cimino on Feb 14, 2010
Nice piece on a show that does nothing but good for people and is for sure helping others.
sambhafusia on Feb 15, 2010
nice share..interesting and very stylish….thnx for sharing..
STEVE666 on Feb 15, 2010
Original write, PE.
clickmarbin on Feb 15, 2010
nice info
T. S. GARP on Feb 17, 2010
Nice one!
S A JOHNSON on Feb 24, 2010
Great and well said piece.
Ruby Hawk on Mar 1, 2010
I have seen the show a few times.I hope they are paid well for getting out front for people to see them struggle. It would be worth it if they intend to keep the weight off.
Sushant94 on Mar 2, 2010
if it hadnt been for the show i’d have said – losers have nothing left to lose so in the end they are all winners!
patofgold23 on Mar 6, 2010
great share!!!!
well thought of!!!!!!!!

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