There is a dead birch in the backyard that I’ve been meaning to get rid of for the last two summers. This was the year and I was about ready to do it when I heard a wren, looked up and noticed she had a nest in a hole in the tree ~ sigh, next year maybe or perhaps in the fall?!

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As bold and alive as it hungers to be,
needs to be
once again;
the old, dead birch
agonizes over its ability to reach
again , the sky.

Tempted in its thirst,
its roots;
Branches bend to feel its feet
rapture in the spell
of the rain.

Its death leaves it a solitary
description of
desolation.
Betrayed by nature, its
very creator.
Mother of conception.

Surrounded by the vitality
of its peers,
the old birch
denies temptation to
become alone.
To become nothing among life.

Forever dreaming of the stars
and of the ability
to breathe again.
Opening hands to embrace
the natural beauty of its death.

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  • papaleng on Jun 8, 2009

    so cute and you did the right thing, let a new life sprout from a dead birch.

  • clay hurtubise on Jun 8, 2009

    Nice piece: though I don’t know wren that tree will come down!
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Jun 8, 2009

    Your poem is very impressive! Keep up your good work! Cheers! Here I clicked “lIke”. Great job!

  • QuinMonty86 on Jun 8, 2009

    Birds!! Loved the poem,though. Nice tribute to a graceful tree at the end of it’s life.

  • Ramalingam on Jun 8, 2009

    I feel sorry for the tree that is nearing its end.Nice.Thanks

  • ken bultman on Jun 8, 2009

    Thanks for your compassion for the little bird. It’s odd the saddness we can feel for a dead tree or perhaps we would not have had it not been generated by your beautiful poem.

  • Christine Ramsay on Jun 8, 2009

    I am so pleased you have left it to the wren this year. This is a wonderful description of the tree’s feelings. Well done.

    Christine

  • STEVE666 on Jun 8, 2009

    Well at least the tree gave inspiration for a great poem, Sheila.

  • Lostash on Jun 8, 2009

    I love old trees…sometimes more beautiful in death than in life!

  • Ruby Hawk on Jun 8, 2009

    All nature’s creatures deserve compassion. Very descriptive poem.

  • Jose Monaca on Jun 9, 2009

    Old trees make me feel good, i don’t know why..

  • skylite on Jun 9, 2009

    Loved it!!!

  • Kate Smedley on Jun 10, 2009

    That’s a beautiful poem about the birch, I’m glad you left it for the wren.

  • writing4angels on Jun 11, 2009

    Very generous thought regarding other living beings.

  • Peter Cimino on Jun 13, 2009

    Absolutley WONDERFUL piece! It is amazing how you can make something as mundane as a birch tree seem to real! xoxo

  • leylucs on Jun 14, 2009

    nice poem!

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