Bird (Senryu Verse)

Priyanka Bhowmick on Nov 29, 2009

Tags: bird, destroy, japanese poetry, migration, poem, Poetry, senryu, terror, verse

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Migration can also be unsafe.

bird seeking new place,
nest destroyed, flies place to place,
terror everywhere.

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Comments (12)

Sukhdarshan on Nov 29, 2009
Excellent expression…
Rinkal Desai on Nov 29, 2009
very touching
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AlmaG on Nov 29, 2009
The reality of this isn’t just for birds but happens with humans as well. A very meaningful poem
craigz on Nov 29, 2009
AlmaG is right. Great.
Goodselfme on Nov 29, 2009
Sad and well stated.
Sue Nuckles on Nov 29, 2009
The reality of our times. Excellent poetry as usual.
Themax on Nov 29, 2009
very true and meaningful poem same happen with us also Thanks
cutedrishti8 on Nov 29, 2009
To the point…Great piece
Sourav on Nov 29, 2009
Very well written!
abhishek40914 on Nov 29, 2009
good one.
M Dalton on Nov 30, 2009
deep !

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