Birds.

The birds are flying and congregated on the roof
While in the sun I sat aloof
They fly and go
I wonder what it is they know
And soon the sun sets down on me
I need to go and let them be.

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Comments (10)
  • Hansika on Nov 12, 2009

    wonderful…

  • drelayaraja on Nov 12, 2009

    Good picture and a sweet poem Teves.

  • wonder on Nov 13, 2009

    Lovely ending—

  • Joie Schmidt on Nov 13, 2009

    Very nice*

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • AlmaG on Nov 13, 2009

    Wonderful poem Teves :)

  • johnnydod on Nov 13, 2009

    What a Tweet to read

  • Darla Cooke on Nov 13, 2009

    Lovely poem!

  • LovelyWolf on Nov 13, 2009

    This is a great poem!

  • Tanya Wallace on Nov 13, 2009

    Lovely work Teves!

  • CutestPrincess on Dec 1, 2009

    a perfect poem for a perfect photo…

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