Birthday Cake

rutherfranc on Oct 4, 2010

As stated.

She looked like a birthday cake, all icing and cream

Seeing her this morning, felt I was still in a dream

With all the bubbly attitude that’s part of her gleam

Holding her suddenly became one of my whims…

II.

Tempting and luscious, she sure shook my craving

Really made me want to partake of that sweet icing

Haven’t tried it yet, but I’m sure it’ll be to my liking

I’ll try to resist it, if only she’ll stop smiling…

III.

Soft and cuddly, I know that’s how she feels

Blissfully giving me that sudden rush of chills

The creaminess of her will surely give me the thrills

satisfying the hunger that her loveliness fills…

IV.

Yup, she’s right there and a move I’m about to make

to avoid taking a slice for my own heart’s sake

But the striking memory of her I am willing to take

An image of a lady, tempting like a birthday cake…

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Comments (11)

Adelnica Amor R. Izon on Oct 4, 2010
this is uber cute@@!
Brewed Coffee on Oct 4, 2010
sweet like a cake
S J Dickens on Oct 4, 2010
Nice post. I could almost see her full of icing lols. but I reli love your imagery.
Shalom rutherfranc
Dee Gold on Oct 4, 2010
Glad you’ve shared another creative piece
The Soul Explorer on Oct 4, 2010
liked it!
webseowriters on Oct 4, 2010
Thanks for sharing
papaleng on Oct 4, 2010
Oh! this so cute, di kaya diabetic ang abutin ng girl.
deep blue on Oct 4, 2010
I couldn’t agree more but papaleng has a point. Thumbs up kabayan.
Sourav on Oct 4, 2010
Nice write.
Karen Gross on Oct 5, 2010
Very romantic and sweet.
ishinimrod on Oct 14, 2010
I like this article but I more like the author. lolz. Peace.Y_Y

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