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Bittersweet Surrender

Oversoul on May 11, 2011
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A very sad poem.

My mind wants to give up,
my body has a long time ago;
Tired of the constant worries,
always feeling so low.

The spark of hope in the distance,
is no longer there;
I am all alone in the darkness,
I no longer care.

I can no longer find my way,
the darkness has made me blind;
So now I finally surrender,
My body, soul and mind.

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  • Aiyanna on May 11, 2011

    The mind is the greatest magic,
    It brings the light to dawn.
    It defies mortal logic,
    With all goodness to surround.

    For thoughts define your actions,
    You actions make the deeds.
    It controls all your reactions,
    Provides for all the needs.

    For it rejuvinates the broken body,
    It awakens the deadened heart,
    It turns you away from the soddy,
    It never lets you part.

    For you are special in every way,
    You are that flower in soul.
    You are cared for in every way,
    For the Creator makes you whole.

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